well since the site name is down in the video i aprove it, like the rules say
voting format:
style: still develloping
flow: good
unique: not yet
variations: good
beatride: 50/50
transitions: need to work on them, try to cleam them up
clean: not so
about the walk:
Vote: i can see you have plenty of variations, now try to control them, and also try something diffrend like we havent seen yet before
in the beginning i thought mm nice beatride interesting but after that it went on and off, try to make a perfect beatride like that
its also immportant to have some control on your transitions, because sometimes
it looks like you are just doing something from move to move, makes it sloppy
i would say junior, i hope you can use my advise for the next tryout
Post edited 10:55 pm – March 28, 2012 by MarianStyle
style: still normal for now.. In develop, keep trying things and working on the style.
flow: oke..
unique: no
variations: oke.. add more, maybe some heel toes and stuff
beatride: oke.. could be better
transitions: normal, a bit sloppy
clean: not much
about the walk:
I like how you play with the upper body haha,
need more control as your walk, but is ok, the attitude (Y
Some sloppy... work in the execution and clean it up.
Try make some unique transitions and combos, be creative.
Add more variations! some heel toes and stuff.
I hope to see a new try out of you in a few months :).
Vote: Junior (low)
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